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on Nov. 02, 2012 :
Still trying to figure out how one would go about “desiccating” a grave—pretty sure what was meant was “desecrating.” There are three major problems that stand out with this story: grammar, characterization, and imagination.
The grammar in this story is quite atrocious, characterization nearly nonexistent, and, as far as imagination, this story feels ‘borrowed’ from movies and television. It’s really not very imaginative. More, it did appear as if the story lacked a protagonist.
This story could be improved significantly simply by bettering its grammar and focusing the events narrated through the eyes of one main character.
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