Imbolc in Michigan

Rated 4.50/5 based on 3 reviews
Morrigan has returned to her home in a small Michigan town. She wasn't happy to be home, but maybe things won't be so bad after all.

(This is my first time publishing...feel free to give pointers)
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Price: Free! USD

Words: 1,190
Language: English
ISBN: 9781465797698

Reviews

Review by: Elizabeth Rowan Keith on Jan. 31, 2013 :
What a delightful first effort. I could not be more encouraging about continuing to write. Attention to small details in description order, formatting, and plot development would contribute to this story. But it is a cordial setting and creates a comfortable family group on which to build a more comprehensive work. It is a pleasant read. It is easy to see the talent behind this work. I hope the author continues.
(review of free book)

Review by: Chris Stanton on Feb. 04, 2012 :
Good. Has potential.
(review of free book)

Review by: Chris Adonn on Jan. 31, 2012 : (no rating)
Lilac, as you have asked for pointers I am going to forgo on giving you a rating and promptly jump right in with my two cents worth.

Centred text is not pleasant to read unless it serves a purpose.
Refer to the Smashwords style guide (its free here at Smashwords) with regards to your formatting and layout.

Your grammar (all aspects thereof) and vocabulary need serious work. I would personally suggest that you invest in language handbooks and study guides. They are most helpful to anyone who wishes to understand the nuances of a language.

If you are serious about writing, I recommend reading. Read various books in various genres by various authors.

Lastly, keep writing. The more you do it, the better you will get at it.
(review of free book)

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