SHOW ME YOUR BODY

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Rated 1.50/5 based on 3 reviews
- story of a 15 year old girl who discovers her feelings for a 28 year old STRAIGHT WOMAN. Read the story to know how she proposes, persuades and CONVERTS her.... More
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Review by: Fiona Flander on Sep. 18, 2014 :
I thought the story was interesting and certainly doesn't deserve being ridiculed. There does appear to be a lack of fluency in written English. The writer needs to write more and read more. I think she has potential. Keep writing.
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Review by: Sky Bailey on Dec. 06, 2012 :
Wow that was hard work I think perhaps the story has been changed from a different language into English. if it hasn't then I don't quite know what to say
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Review by: Sylvir on March 07, 2012 : (no rating)
This is so bad. So bad. Don't read this unless you want a laugh. The grammar is terrible, not even remotely excusable. The story itself is just shit. Plot? You mean that pile of human feces over here? The sex scenes shows the author never engaged in sex, read about, seen it, heard about it or was even in the same country as someone who had sex. Characterization? What characterization?

This book needs to come with a "Do Not Read" warning on it for public safely.
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