First Time For Everything

Adult
Rated 4.67/5 based on 3 reviews
Pretty and sweet Jordana returns to her college dorm after a bad date cut short to the sympathetic shoulder of her luscious friend and roommate Adie. And if it turns out to be more than a shoulder...why not, they're just good friends with nothing to lose, right? More
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Review by: Naoko Smith on July 12, 2012 :
Hot stuff alright. I think you got the hesitation OK, I mean this is a story, if you spend pages and pages on the agonising uncertainty of whether the poor women can admit to each other how they feel, they'll be old and arthritic - like most shy lesbian women are before they finally get up the courage to say, Actually I like you!
I like how you gave them a rationale for knowing what to do, that Adie had read a few magazines (possibly pointed towards them by her kind gay guy pals).
Couple of typos, I think. I was a bit distracted by the end there!
I'll put a review of this on my blog Feminist Erotica feministerotica.blogspot.co.uk, check it out.
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Review by: Eve Stevens on April 18, 2012 :
Quick and to the point. Leaves you wanting more, like a good story should. And it flowed very smoothly from set-up to finish.

But maybe it all went a little too easy? The story was missing the hesitation and awkwardness of two people trying a completely new thing. It's not so simple to do on a whim!

But still, it was very nicely written and a fun, quick read.
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Review by: Ernest Winchester on Feb. 17, 2012 :
Maybe the first time, but surely not the last.
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