The Virtuous Woman

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My first creative piece coming completely fiction from my life's experiences. A woman's sexual revolution. More
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About Lori Finnila

I am a singer/songwriter who performs regularly. I have work at iTunes and Amazon. I'm available for concerts, tours, and commercial use. I write primarily acoustic music now. I am an award winning performer who brings soul to my music. I've studied music for 2 years and now study writing for my music.

Lending from her admiration of true-rock artists of Stevie Nicks, Heart, and The Pretenders and holding strength from Cyndi Lauper, she had to find a way of breaking through with 'A Special Message Of Love' coming out 2015.

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Review by: Sharon E. Cathcart on June 02, 2010 :
I'm not sure what to think of this book. The plot is good: an actress (the strong implication is that she's in porn) named Celia is trapped in a violent relationship and, though pregnant, is trying to figure out how to leave.

However, there were a lot of puzzles for me. There are numerous run-on sentences, and I couldn't decide whether this was an intentional thing. Perhaps the author was going for a Kerouac stream-of-consciousness type of writing? There are also homonym disagreements ("erroneous zones" is not the same as "erogenous zones"), some downright puzzling vocabulary choices ("She went to an allude place deep inside") and misuse of "were" vs. "was."

The unfortunate result of this was that I had a hard time focusing on the story. I kept getting hung up on the grammar and sentence structure, trying to figure out what the author was trying to tell me.

It's a pity, because the overall premise had a great deal of potential. I had to take off stars for grammar and vocabulary problems, and I never enjoy doing that.
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