The Virtuous Woman

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My first creative piece coming completely fiction from my life's experiences. A woman's sexual revolution. More
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About Lori Finnila

Lori Jean is the new act of Single Women Entrepreneurs who has written, composed, and even recorded her own songs! And it shows through her music in her new album and new music debuting this year titled 'The Virtuous Woman'. Two EP's are out now at iTunes, 'Chunk of Love' - A Girl's Crazy Night Out, and 'What Ever Happened to Little Lisa?'

She survived an impact from a gunshot wound to her head. This opened the Pandora box which led her to write. http://plus.ly/lorijean.

Lori Finnila currently resides in Oregon and has three published books "When I Woke Up", "Black Sheep Never Cry, Dedicated to the memory of John F. Kennedy, Jr.", and “The Virtuous Woman”. She is aspiring to have her work produced for movies and to partake in the production of these and eventually open a Women Production House. She is also working on 'Teens At Crossroads of America and Beyond' to get every teen of the street.

http://Lori-Jean.com

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Review by: Sharon E. Cathcart on June 02, 2010 :
I'm not sure what to think of this book. The plot is good: an actress (the strong implication is that she's in porn) named Celia is trapped in a violent relationship and, though pregnant, is trying to figure out how to leave.

However, there were a lot of puzzles for me. There are numerous run-on sentences, and I couldn't decide whether this was an intentional thing. Perhaps the author was going for a Kerouac stream-of-consciousness type of writing? There are also homonym disagreements ("erroneous zones" is not the same as "erogenous zones"), some downright puzzling vocabulary choices ("She went to an allude place deep inside") and misuse of "were" vs. "was."

The unfortunate result of this was that I had a hard time focusing on the story. I kept getting hung up on the grammar and sentence structure, trying to figure out what the author was trying to tell me.

It's a pity, because the overall premise had a great deal of potential. I had to take off stars for grammar and vocabulary problems, and I never enjoy doing that.
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