One Man Army: Part One

Rated 1.75/5 based on 4 reviews
Cal and a highly trained unit of soldiers head must head into Russia to find out about a top secret nuclear weapon. his unit is all killed and he must proceed...alone.
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Review by: Nolan Mielke on July 24, 2014 :
Being fairly honest here, I can see what the lower reviews mean, there are several grammar issues and the formatting is rather poor...BUT! That does NOT mean that the plot in uninteresting, it may well be a good story, but it needs to be fixed and proofread. If you need somebody to help you with that then I would be glad to help you out if you would like. I'm just trying to be a fellow author and help another.

cheers!

-Nolan Mielke
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Review by: Travis Ford on March 05, 2012 :
The story seems a interesting war story, but there are too many grammer errors and puncuation errors in the story of your chapters uploaded and appearing as a sample chapters of a incomplete story.
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Review by: Ray Daley on Feb. 25, 2012 :
try proof reading at least 4 times before you upload, some sentences appear to have words missing so don't make sense. You should always captilize the first letter in a name (which you both do then don't, terrible habit, get out of it now!). Smashwords frowns on ppl uploaded incomplete stories. If you're gonna write something, finish it, then upload it.
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Review by: Steven Calver on Feb. 25, 2012 :
There are quite a few typo's in this story and grammatical mistakes. Seems more like a first draft for a much larger journey. The cover reminded me of 'The Favour Men.'
There's even mistakes in the eBook description, and tells the entire story of what happens.
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