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Anita Lawless writes erotica & bdsm romance from somewhere in an urban jungle. With C.J Sneere, she runs Wild & Lawless Writers. Check out all of her titles, plus more from the Wild & Lawless Writers, at: http://wildlawlesswriters.blogspot.com
on Dec. 08, 2012 :
Good read. The first couple chapters, I thought it was more romance than erotica. Not that it's a bad thing, but the storyline just seemed to be heading that way. But I was wrong....it was more erotic for the last couple chapters. There is errata - oogling instead of ogling is one example - but not enough to detract from the stories. There really isn't a taboo factor in the stories; yes he is her step-brother but they were older when their parents got married so it's not like it started at a young age. It was hard to believe that someone who wasn't that experienced with sex was so open & carefree about it once she got going. And the fact that she was in love with her step-brother but wanted to f*ck other guys (threesomes and more-somes) was a bit off. Scenes described were hot and descriptive, but it just seemed to be sex for the sake of it. Several descriptive phrases were repeated over & over and it was tiring after awhile. If it would have stayed as a romance it would have been great. If it would have started like a slutty novel and stayed that way, it would have been great. This was just good.
(reviewed long after purchase)