on April 18, 2012 :
I almost get the feeling the author wishes his tale would come true. There are a lot of loose ends, but the story is enjoyable despite it's flaws. I look forward to reading more of his work. A good imagination that looks in a different direction to most fantasy models. Just one little bugbear; please use a grammar checker or a good proofreader. We're is short for we are. Were is the past tense of are. 4 stars for the imagination and the consistency of the flashbacks, which can be difficult to maintain.
(review of free book)