The Lost Graveyard.

Rated 3.33/5 based on 3 reviews
What if you came back from the dead,came back to life.What would you do?
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Words: 17,640
Language: English
ISBN: 9781476392202
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Review by: Jackie Williams on Jan. 20, 2014 :
I enjoyed this book. It kept my attention. It would have made 5 stars, but for editing, formatting problems. The storyline is very good, I totally enjoyed the dialogue. The characters are great, each one hiding a twist of fate. It sure makes one think of the limbo side of death.
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Review by: Alison Fish on June 25, 2013 :
Even though I like stories of this genre, the zombie aspect wasn't what kept my attention. I liked the diverse characters and the twist on the fear of death. The characters weren't afraid of dying, but afraid of coming back to life every night. Their problem was figuring out how to remain dead. The idea that they were unable to leave the cemetery was cool too, and the descriptions of what they saw and how they felt as they looked beyond the gates they were unable to pass through.

I have to agree with David Blake regarding the spelling and grammatical errors though. It would have been even more enjoyable if it had been cleaned up.
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Review by: David Blake on May 04, 2013 :
I thought this was a really, really good story. A hugely intriguing scenario, in many respects more of a character play than an out-and-out horror tale.

I did think it was over-long, however, and wished it could have been only about half of the length. Descriptions all but disappeared after the initial introductions of the characters, save for the closing scene. And the sheer number of spelling or punctuation errors was very distracting, with numerous confusions between "to" and "too", "said" and "side", "accept" and "except", and an irritating insistence on preceding any character's name with a comma.

A decent editor would probably get this story up to "5" standard. As it stands, it's only a 3, but a very thought-provoking 3 all the same.
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