A M Kirkby writes a wide range of fiction, including fantasy, SF and historical novels and short stories.
C S McClellan
on Sep. 10, 2013 :
It's an intriguing beginning,, but it isn't a good idea to preview a novel by publishing a chapter that's full of typos and punctuation errors. The frequent substition of a question mark for the first letter of a sentence may be a problem of converting one word processor format to another. But there are places, where a sentence is incorrectly divided, sometimes with two punctuation marks together. Also sentences without spaces in between, and a few other problems. I read it first in PDF format, which can sometimes be a problem, but the same errors appear in the epub version.
(review of free book)