Nicole In Our Bed

Adult
Rated 4.83/5 based on 13 reviews
We'd been thinking about it, talking about it, even joking about it, for years. I thought it was all just a sexy fantasy, some spicy pillow talk. Something to get him hot. For me. But now there's another woman in our bedroom. Young, achingly gorgeous, and undressing very slowly as my husband and I watch from our bed. And anticipate. Try to imagine. In a few moments, I'm going to have to decide. More
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About Jay Whett

Jay Whett uses her storytelling skills in cubicles and conference rooms throughout the Silicon Valley and around the country, trying to help Internet start-ups and struggling web-based businesses of all sizes generate a coherent vision and articulate a clear path to success. Once back home, she writes dirty stories late into the night, usually after a bit too much wine.

Her stories explore, at least on some level, the ambiguities of life – and especially sex. Ambiguous motivation, desire and consent. Sometimes ambiguous sexuality. Most have ambiguous endings, because ‘happily ever after’ is often only a fleeting moment.

Many of her stories are told from the first person, although this seems to annoy some people and she has promised to explore other points of view in the future. But if that bothers you, please beware.

None of her stories are especially autobiographic, although she has high hopes for several to become so someday, perhaps when she has more spare time. For extra credit, you can try to guess which ones.

Jay thinks there are way too many tales out there of perfect fucks. Double-D barely-legal blond beauties and chiseled hunks hung like a donkey having multiple, perfectly timed simultaneous orgasms, and then collapsing into a perfectly satisfied heap. Fade out, the end.

Can you imagine anything more boring than reading something like that?.

But every imperfect story can be imperfect in its own special and interesting way, if it’s told well.

She likes stories with a bit more bite. Twisty little tales of unexpected sex, nervous sex, reluctant sex, surprising sex, defiant sex. Breakup and makeup sex. Angry sex, difficult sex, dangerous sex...

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Reviews

Review by: Francis Haley on July 21, 2014 :
Better than most first threesome stories, but still seemed a little flat to me
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Review by: Eliza Fanning on April 30, 2014 :
much better told than the typical 'first time threesome' stories, nicely paced, well written and most of all HOT and steamy... loved it!
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Review by: Emily Patterson on March 11, 2014 :
I liked the way the story built up with all the main characters fears, shyness and nerves and all of that made it more realistic and fun to read along the way.
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Review by: Katie Tegan on Feb. 01, 2014 :
Great - very realistic description of a first-time threesome, and very sexy. It got me going, lol.
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Review by: KT McColl on Jan. 11, 2014 :
This short story came as a pleasant surprise. What seemed at the outset to be a straight-forward erotic episode was given satisfying context through frequent flashbacks. I particularly liked the fact that the characters express their reservations about the situation, all of which gives the narrative a maturity and honesty that is often missing in this type of story.
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Review by: Hannah Wing on Oct. 11, 2013 :
Yup, I was thinking about this long after I read it. What I really liked about this is that it explored what the emotions of the characters which is something that is so lacking in a lot of erotica. I would have liked to have seem more of the husbands personality. He kind of came across as nothing more than a penis at times, but over all I have to give this story five stars. The author is truly talented.
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Review by: Belinda LaPage on Aug. 03, 2013 :
Magnificent piece of erotica. Probably the longest single sex scene I have read. Smoking hot too. The wife's reluctant journey from hetero to bi is convincing and very sexy
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Review by: James Eld on July 28, 2013 :
One of the best 3some tales I have read. Very descriptive, non violent, but very explicet. So pleased that I found the story.
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Review by: hrhsophia on Jan. 04, 2013 :
Very well written and very sensual.
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Review by: kathi horner on Sep. 09, 2012 :
Very Nice
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Review by: Aimee Kennell on June 05, 2012 :
Wow, this is some of the best erotica I've read from Smashwords. Well-written, very HOT, and a great story line. And did I mention that it was very HOT?

I will be reading more from this author.
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Review by: Spyder on April 16, 2012 : (no rating)
Best I have read in a long time! Flows nice and slow, drawn out sensualness. Very well written.
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Review by: Eve Stevens on April 06, 2012 :
Wow! Just wow! Breathtaking. Stunning. Incredible. Different, but in lots of very good ways. Lots of little, unexpected touches; most of which don't really register until later in the story.

I devoured it, then just had to have a long, steaming jacuzzi (you gals know what I mean!) to think it over. Then read it again, and liked it even better the second time. So, it's back to the jacuzzi after this!

During the sex (which there is plenty of, and plenty of wet, juicy details of) the narration gradually takes on a syncopated, jazzy rhythm that I had to go back over in some places. It gets complicated (but worth it!) and never seemed to unfold in quite the way I was expecting. But it always made sense in the end. I think. What it did was really make me feel what the characters were feeling, which is the whole point of storytelling (especially in porn!)

The story starts in the middle, like it should, and it's forward movement is interrupted (during the 'cooling off' usually) to fill in the beginning in little sips. They sometimes clarify what we've just seen, sometimes give context to what follows.

No vampires, werewolves, or aliens in here. No strap-on wielding cheerleaders raping german shepherds. If that's your thing, look elsewhere. But if you like stories of real people, in a situation that could happen in anybody's bedroom (if the circumstances were right) it's in here.
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