Opal Rain

Rated 3.00/5 based on 2 reviews
Opal's world has been turned upside-down. Having grown up in an orphanage with her older brother. Disaster strikes when her brother is taken and murdered. She soon discovers that her life isn't what she thought it was. Who can she trust when her oldest friend betrays her. Faced with a fate that she seems to have no control over will she follow her destiny or her heart.
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Price: Free! USD
Words: 14,900
Language: English
ISBN: 9781476314525
About Crystal Lewis

Born and raised in Australia, as a child I spent most of my time reading. I started writing at about 12 however I didn’t decide that any of my work was good enough to publish until 5 years later when I started writing ‘Opal Rain’ after much encouragement from my wonderful fiancé.

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Review by: Peter Pollak on July 28, 2013 :
Crystal requested people review her "book." Crystal is to be commended for trying to write a book––although 15,000 words is novella or long short story––not a book. She's not ready to be an author, however. She needs to do more reading of good literature and spend more time learning the rules of English grammar. In the first two paragraphs of this story I found the following grammatical mistakes: commas used instead of periods, run-on sentences, missing periods at the end of sentences, a missing preposition, and incorrect word use (past when she meant passed). But the grammatical mistakes are just the beginning of the problems with this "book". Opal Rain is a child's horror story which takes place in an incompletely formed world. It is imitative and juvenile. If Crystal is smart, she will withdraw this book from the marketplace and try again in two or five years when she's ready to write something that meets today's standards for y.a. writing.
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Review by: William Ryan on July 27, 2013 :
This is one of the best books I've read this year
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