| Format | Full Book |
|---|---|
| Online Reading (HTML, good for sampling in web browser) | View |
| Kindle (.mobi for Kindle devices and Kindle apps) | Download |
| Epub (Apple iPad/iBooks, Nook, Sony Reader, Kobo, and most e-reading apps including Stanza, Aldiko, Adobe Digital Editions, others) | Download |
| PDF (good for reading on PC, or for home printing) | Download |
| RTF (readable on most word processors) | Download |
| LRF (Use only for older model Sony Readers that don't support .epub) | Download |
| Palm Doc (PDB) (for Palm reading devices) | Download |
| Plain Text (download) (flexible, but lacks much formatting) | Download |
| Plain Text (view) (viewable as web page) | View |
Review by:
Ray Daley
on May 28, 2012 :
paragraph breaks would greatly aid the readability of this.
(review of free book)
Review by:
Jon Olson
on May 18, 2012 :
Aside from some grammar issues, this story was very enjoyable. It was a good length and was very well paced.
(review of free book)
Review by:
Joy Johnson
on May 16, 2012 :
On the positive side: The story sounds interesting. I liked the author's dedication to description throughout the piece.
On the negative side: Grammar is an issue. The sentence structures throughout are riddled with technical problems.
Words for the author: You have a good idea here, but for some reason, you have not developed it into a perfected masterpiece before publication. This leaves the reader feeling frustrated. Please find a creative writing group in your area, or start one of your own and meet at the library. They may be able to help you unlock issues in your writing that you may not have seen before. Good luck!
Respectfully,
Joy Johnson
Freelance Writer
http://www.smashwords.com/profile/view/JoyJohnson
(review of free book)