Bunnies

Rated 4.60/5 based on 11 reviews
The infamous Easter chiller - now available in a terrifying new "Easter 2011 Edition" featuring many, many less typos and at least 13% more fire (with kind reference to the attentions of Ms Wielding). Please note that this is NOT a children's story... although it does feature children, and bunnies... More
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Words: 4,620
Language: English
ISBN: 9781452336985
About Justin Cawthorne

As a budding writer for far too long I'm hoping [insert current year] will be the year that I finally beat [insert current excuse] and get writing again.
I've dabbled in screenplays, have a taste for the irreverent (as well as the irrelevant) but horror seems to be my chief muse. Still, let's see what else wants to come out.
As long as it's not poetry - I'm really rubbish at poetry.

(p.s. I really appreciate reviews - I love to know what you think of my stories, even if you didn't like them...)

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Review by: Boudica Foster on Jan. 18, 2012 :
Great short story - wonderfully done. Not a childrens book - but adults will find this a wonderful short read. Horror genre.
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Review by: db23 on July 31, 2011 :
Pretty good for a horror short about kids; my only real issue was that I didn't really understand the 'rules' of how the bunnies worked (I don't want to say much more to avoid spoilers).
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Review by: Helen de Wolff on April 28, 2011 :
What a great little story! Often with unknown authors there is a concern about spelling and grammatical errors that an editor would pick up. Not so here; I was able to relax and enjoy the action.
I loved the difference in writing styles between the two characters, painted a better picture than paragraphs of descriptive prose.
Will hunt down your others now!
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Review by: Christine Feary on April 28, 2011 :
I really enjoyed this story. I liked the transition between the two characters, it happened very organically with the transferring of the box.

It drew me in in a subtle way - I was just casually reading and slowly found myself getting more and more tense waiting to find out what would happen.

Very imaginative and engaging, great work as always :-)
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Review by: Serendypyty on April 28, 2011 :
I love the way that this was written from the perspective of the children themselves - the thought process, the innocence and the realisation of consequences following actions.
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Review by: Heather Wielding on April 19, 2011 : (no rating)
Zombies are a bit of a cliche, zombie bunnehs a bit of a stretch. It could have worked, had you made the changes between characters clearer, and given the bunnies more purpose. Now this seemed like it was trying too hard, trying to be horror just for the sake of it. There was no warmth between the lines. I could feel no fire. Passion, yes, but fire, no.

And typos. Many typos.
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Review by: Desiree Goldsmith on Jan. 29, 2011 :
This is a great evil little story. Well written and a little twisted. I will never look at my daughters rabbits in the same way again!
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Review by: Ian Woodhead on Sep. 21, 2010 :
A great little story there. Thanks for sharing.
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Review by: Perry Burchard on Aug. 20, 2010 :
Great characters and buildup, tapping into how crappy kids are to each other and fears of critters. I wasn't too crazy about half the story centering on Katarina and half on Brendan, and there were a few typos, such as 'breath' where 'breathe' was intended. I think a leaner, 3500-word version would do the trick more effectively, but overall I enjoyed reading it--most importantly, I finished!
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Review by: Patti on July 04, 2010 :
Good story! Starts out with a feel like a normal children's story with a hint of foreshadowing, and then gets darker and definitely creepier.
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Review by: Kelli Caselman on June 28, 2010 :
This was nicely written from a child's point of view. Bunnies have now joined the creepy ranks with clowns and ice cream trucks. The window was a little much, but still an awesome story.
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