Little Red Hood (An Erotic Fairy Tale)

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Rated 3.00/5 based on 1 reviews
Something is stalking Red through the woods, an unseen silhouette that dances in the shadows and forces her on a harrowing path of self-realization and sacrifice. If she hopes to make it home alive, she needs to act quickly before everything unravels around her. More

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Words: 5,640
Language: English
ISBN: 9781927123362
Tags: tale angel fairy

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Review by: David H. Keith on July 01, 2012 :
My mother used to tell me "if you can't say something nice about someone, then don't say anything at all." Sound advice, that, but not always possible.

Ms. Black's story was, um, an interesting take on the traditional Red Riding Hood fable from childhood. Sadly, I found it hard to read and really get into. Ms. Black makes the same mistakes so many young writers do (and I'm assuming she is, in fact, young): she uses a font that is hard on the eyes, pays little heed to basic grammar, punctuation, and word use, and greatly overuses adverbs and adjectives. These things, like spices, should be used sparingly and with discretion.

I don't know if Ms. Black was in a hurry to publish or just didn't take the time to proofread her manuscript...and that's a shame. It's an interesting story, but her inattention to the details of good writing detract from it immensely. I would suggest she go back and revise this story, paying much greater attention to the minutiae of writing (grammar, punctuation, spelling, and word use) and then republish.

I wish her a great deal of luck.

David H. Keith
www.novemberfirstpublishing.weebly.com
(review of free book)

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