7:45 Evil Time

Rated 2.75/5 based on 4 reviews
I'm sorry, I've recieved a few slightly rude reviews. As I stated in a previous description, this is a test. I do not know how to format. There is a reason it was free.

Please, skip rude and try helpful. I'm trying to figure it out, but I'm having problems.
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Price: Free! USD
Words: 740
Language: English
About James Janzen

My name is James Janzen, and I'm currently an amateur author trying to become published. I'm testing out Smashwords, and hopefully I'll be able to post a few short stories here. Any feedback is always appreciated!

Reviews

Review by: Richard Lowe on Feb. 06, 2014 :
I liked it. Seemed to flow really well and was quite humorous. Would like to see more.
(review of free book)

Review by: Ray Daley on July 12, 2012 :
Hard to read? Insanely hard to read!
Seriously, learn what a line space is.
(review of free book)

Review by: Ardy on July 11, 2012 :
Interesting, but I agree that it needs to be formatted properly. It's hard to read. The world created has a lot of potential, but there needs to be a lot more development. If this is a test of smashwords, maybe you have some other works as well. There is talent here, but a quick read of the style guide and formatting rules would benifit you.
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Review by: Sandra Black on July 11, 2012 :
Well I read the first page and then stopped - I just couldn't be bothered. The formatting is poor and the stream of consciousness approach is dull and uninteresting. At least the spelling was mostly right. Would a traditional publisher publish this? Nope.
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