Before I Get Married - Romance Short Story

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Rated 3.33/5 based on 3 reviews
Kelly is getting married in three days. Her girl friends want to throw her a bachelorette party.

Kelly has confided in her best friend Mellisa that she wants a "no strings attached one night stand" before she gets married because Roger is the only other guy she has been with.

She makes arrangements with Austin to make her last night of freedom one to remember.
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Price: Free! USD

Words: 5,860
Language: English
ISBN: 9781452358734
About Marion Francis

I am a short story and novella writer. All my stories are original fiction.

My characters are derived from my readers character requests, people watching, worldwide business travel, vacation, magazines, and pure imagination.

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Review by: Bekki Lynn on Aug. 01, 2011 :
The story felt incomplete. At the end, I felt like the use of Margaret was no more than a prop. If the story was to be about Kelly experiencing a another man before she married, there are better ways of doing it than starting a senario with someone else and not finishing it. I would have preferred more of the actual story between Austin and the women rather than having been told intentions with no follow through. It's ok to let a reader come to their own conclusions in some situations, but not the main storylines.

On the writing end, like I mentioned for Big Girl Love, there are comma, puncuation and dialog tag issues. The major hiccup for me was the use of the name of Raven Simone who specializes in high class escorts, I had trouble getting past that. I don't like to see high profile professionals used in stories. Also, this author has a tendency to mix tenses which could be corrected with critique partner. I have to rate it 2 stars.
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Review by: Bekki Lynn on Aug. 03, 2010 :
I enjoyed the story, you have terrific promise. However, I would suggest a critique partner and maybe check out proper formating manuscript formatting.
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Review by: KC Bouma on May 12, 2009 :
It was quite an interesting plot, but as an author like myself, If I were you, I would have someone critique it. You always want to put your best work out there even if it is free.
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