on July 20, 2010 :
The first paragraph of this work snagged me. Very visual with well-drawn characters. While the story could still use an editor's touch (several run-on sentences) it's still a delight to read. Captain Donovan and Wocha are easy to see, and the story fun to follow. I've grabbed it as a PDF, because I'd love to have it in print.
(review of free book)