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Stella Fyre writes Femdom novels, often with the touch of the occult or supernatural. Her powerful scenarios are chilling and exciting, keeping the reader guessing at the next twist of the story right to the end.
on Aug. 12, 2011 :
First and foremost, the story is well written. Unlike other e-books I have purchased, this story doesn't contain any glaring syntax or grammar errors, and the writer keeps the story pace moving at a good rate. Chapter one is especially well done, as an introduction to what the three mistresses seek.
The story suffers with the entire Mistress Sylvia scene; indeed, I almost quit reading at that point. Such treatment of a novice is inexcusable, and the three mistresses pass it off with no consequence to Mistress Sylvia - so much for the three mistresses deserving Bobby's trust. The story tagging should have mentioned male-on-male contact - I for one would not have purchased the story had I known what awaited under Mistress Sylvia's supposed control.
The narration could have used more empathy to Bobby's emotional feelings - at times the tone was rather clinical.
4 stars plus for the writing, with points off for the poor tagging and weak section.
(reviewed long after purchase)