An Indian Slave Capture and Breaking

Adult
Rated 1.50/5 based on 6 reviews
This was a plot bunny that hopped into my head and would not leave me alone till I wrote it down. Set in the wild west a man and woman move out and the woman is captured and used as a sex slave.

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Words: 1,360
Language: English
ISBN: 9781476260563
About James Masters

James Masters is not trying to be the best but if it happens along the way so be it. Personally he write for himself and he enjoy it as a great hobby but he is not trying to make a career out of writing anything its all for fun. Like on the fan fiction stories written long before this flamers will be ignored don't like the stories do not read them.

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Review by: Susan MomBlogger on Oct. 21, 2012 :
It would help if the author had used spell, and actually put some thought into the women's emotional state instead of just writing what a man might want to happen in a twisted fantasy.
Most people who read erotica, are not interested in badly spelled porn, but actually expect some substance and a tiny bit of realistic emotion.
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Review by: Ly Siren on Aug. 09, 2012 :
Granted words are missed spelled but i thought it was good...granted what woman would fuck a bunch of indians after her husband dies bt i guess thats why its fiction right...oh and fantasy.....
I do have to say that the pregnant part(they take women to get them pregnant to keep their clan going) should be exlained more but it was good
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Review by: Jack A Benson on July 25, 2012 :
I read to paragraph four and gave up, Words misspelt and grammar missing. For example: thru instead of through; beet instead of beat; stipend instead of stripped. If you can't spell, don't write. Writing is about communication. Ernest Winchester in his review below was spot on.
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Review by: Anthony Beal on July 20, 2012 :
Multiple words used incorrectly and a main character who reacts to her situation in a highly implausible fashion made it impossible for me to rate this any higher.
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Review by: Brad Stuff X on July 15, 2012 :
So full of wrong words, its unreadable. Seems, someone did a spell-check and just took the first choice.
Besides that, totally unrealistic.
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Review by: Ernest Winchester on July 12, 2012 :
Awful, just awful!
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