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N. S. Charles
on Sep. 09, 2012 :
It's very hard to give four stars to such an enjoyable story, but despite what stood out from it, there are some concerning elements. A few of sentences are sticky and odd, maybe a remnant of a first draft with words out of place that killed a bit of the lovely immersion a few times. Toward the end things get a bit jumbled, but mostly because our heroine loses focus on anything but what's going on down below. But for its cons, the author does an over the top job of laying the characters out and having them build over so short a story.
The copious amount of action here is good, great even, but miss a delectable, gritty over-description that could take this from erotic to downright dirty. Not to be mistaken, the story is very raunchy and very fantastically envisions giddy, teenage strap-on loving, but a few passages really lacked the descriptive punch to make this a five star.
Please keep up pacing like this in future stories, but I'd definitely love to see more of the main character thoughts/style of thinking integrated into the prose with a recurring theming or phrase.
(reviewed within a month of purchase)
on Aug. 14, 2012 :
This is a really nicely written lesbian awakening/coming out story with believable characters, a well thought out plot and lots of really great F/F sex. Highly recommended!
(reviewed the day of purchase)