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Rated 3.50/5 based on 4 reviews
A vacation scene you won't forget. Join Sarah Elizabeth as she imagines what you'll do to her on your private beach...
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Words: 1,400
Language: English
ISBN: 9781476366463

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Review by: Roger Bateman on Aug. 26, 2012 :
I liked the point of view, it made me feel like it was a letter being written to me.
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Review by: Jack A Benson on Aug. 19, 2012 :
Stories written in the 2nd person always take a little getting used to. I think this story would be better written in the first person — it tends to be a bit more erotic. Pretty good sexual tension but towards the end it read very much like a man writing, which perhaps confused the style even more. Keep writing!
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Review by: hrhsophia on Aug. 19, 2012 :
I have to agree with the other reviewer the POV was a little weird but still overall very hot descriptions.
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Review by: Isuru Abeysinghe on Aug. 19, 2012 :
I have not read a lot of erotica but sometimes if they are short I'll have a read if they look kinda normal. It was decent writing but from an erotic perspective I found it weird looking into the mind of a woman refering to myself (as the subject) was doing things to her... haha. I don't know if I speak for everybody but it feels more natural to me from the male perspective (ie. the other way around) but perhaps I am not the target audience (aren't I selfish?)
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