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Review by:
Harlan Rouge Pryce
on Sep. 05, 2011 :
(no rating)
**Contains Spoilers... Sort Of**
Man, that gave me the creepy crawlies! Were this listed under horror, I would definitely have given it 4 out of 5 stars, but under erotica, I feel the twist at the end kind of ruined the whole erotic element that had been built up through the start and middle. I was thinking maybe this woman would get to know one of the guys as a human being and change her mind about her coldness towards him/them, but that's not what happened. And that wasn't what you wanted to convey in your story... that's what I would have liked to have read, but it's your story.
Good job on the creepiness, though. I actually didn't see it coming. I guess it shows that I don't read a lot of horror.
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Review by:
Kristina Howells
on June 09, 2011 :
I found it an amusing little story.
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Review by:
Emily Merritt
on April 30, 2011 :
Crap that's all I can say
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Review by:
E. Miranda Hernandez
on Nov. 11, 2010 :
The climax was thought-provoking and unexpected, but the story didn't seem to have an ending. Would have liked a bit more exposition.
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Review by:
David Jeffery
on Sep. 26, 2010 :
Tongue in cheek and visceral. A refreshingly graphic read.
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Review by:
Abby F
on Sep. 07, 2010 :
Terrible. Don't bother.
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Review by:
Jaikay Wright
on Sep. 05, 2010 :
(no rating)
The end left me just as unsatisfied.
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Review by:
Lili Koi
on Aug. 19, 2010 :
a gruesome twist to women's pleasure
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