Born of Water

Rated 4.67/5 based on 3 reviews
In the buried archives of the Temple of Dust may lie the secret to defeating the Curse, a creature which seeks to destroy 16 year old Ria for the forbidden gifts she possesses. But it is from among the ranks of those who control the Curse where Ria will find her best chance of success. Only the Priestess Niri can save Ria from the forces that hunt her, if Niri doesn’t betray the girl first. More
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Price: Free! USD
Words: 112,800
Language: English
ISBN: 9781476366135
About Autumn Birt

Autumn (also known as Weifarer) is a travel and fiction writer currently based in Maine (though she wants to travel the world) where she lives in a small cottage lost in the woods, which she built with her husband. When not writing, house building, or traveling, she likes to take long hikes with her spouse and fiesty Cairn Terriers. Her work is featured on the adventure travel website No Map Nomads where she is the co-editor and writer. She is also a member of Guild of Dreams, which features her blog posts as well as those of eleven other fantasy writers. She is an indie author with four books currently available: the epic fantasy trilogy on elemental magic the Rise of the Fifth Order – Born of Water , Rule of Fire, and Spirit of Life, plus a book on the background to the world – Born of Water’s Novel Companion, and the adventure travel compilation Danger Peligros!. She has plans for many more novels. Check out blog and her Facebook page for updates or here for news on her current WIP!

With a Bachelor of Arts degree from Bucknell University in Studio Arts and English, Autumn once considered a career in illustration. After a few years of selling paintings while working as the manager of a gallery and custom framing store, a party and fine gifts store in Virginia, working retail at a gourmet kitchen store, being the head embroider at college clothing store, and finally waitressing for a year (hey it is hard out there as a fine artist… and a writer!), she decided to head back to University. After two years of intense science courses, this career path change led to a Master of Science degree in Ecology and Environmental Sciences from the University of Maine in Orono. Since graduating with her M.S., Autumn has worked for the USDA Natural Resources Conservation Service. This is a great job that not only lets her help the environment and protect local agriculture, but also gives her a paycheck big enough to support her writing habit!

A wanderer at heart, Autumn’s desire to travel has led her to France while still in high school, a year abroad in Manchester, UK which led to excursions in Wales, Scotland, Ireland, and around many parts of England, and more recent trips with family to Mexico (both the Pacific and Gulf of Mexico sides), US Virgin Islands, British Virgin Islands, Bahamas, Spain, Gibraltar, Morocco, Costa Rica, Saba, Barbados, St. Lucia, St. Maarten, and four Canadian provinces (on motorbike!). She has plans for many further adventures both real and fictional.

Reviews

Review by: Ralph Smith on July 21, 2014 :
From the mysterious opening to the clever ending I found this book very enjoyable. Always on the lookout for a series I can give my teenager to read I am glad I found this one.

Not one but 3 female leads! The story moves along at a good pace and keeps you wanting more. The author did a great job in describing her fantastical world without getting bogged down. You could certainly see and feel what the characters experienced and feel their peril.

Remembering the age of our heroes the angst they experience is certainly believable and relate-able.

This book has all the elements you want. Peril, unrequited love, coming of age, and a whole lot more.

Having found themselves thrown into this dangerous journey to protect the people they love these these heroes are believable in their fears and reluctance. It is only because of the fact that they stick together no matter what that they survive.

Some readers may nit pick little things but if you like young adult fantasy then this is a great read overall and still worthy of the 5 stars. I think it promises to be a great series.
(review of free book)

Review by: Stewart Bint on June 22, 2013 :
Okay...I'm biased, because this is exactly my sort of book. But maybe that bias should make me more critical...but there is absolutely nothing to dislike about Born Of Water. Just as naiad Niri is born of water, then Autumn Birt is born to write.

Her story skilfully tells of an epic journey, while developing the characters of our heroes and heroines. The looks and gestures that pass between them help to transport the reader to the deck of the ship or the seat of the camel. We're not simply reading about this quest...we're there with them.
(reviewed long after purchase)

Review by: Jean Gill on March 30, 2013 :
Enjoyable fantasy suitable for young adult audience

Four young adults travel by boat, by camel and on foot, to evade the Curse, a winged beast that kills users of forbidden magic and those who use magic outside the rules of ‘the Church’, which is composed of four orders of Elementals.

I very much liked the notion of Elemental magic. Niri’s power over water is used imaginatively in the various adventures throughout the journey, and control of air makes for an exciting battle versus the Curse. The story is well-developed and I was genuinely interested in what would happen next. The fantasy world is easy to visualise, with landscapes common to the genre, ranging from tree-dwellings to desert. There are often details that lift the description above the usual; the four temples are well-created and struck me as different.

Details of the sea journeys are especially convincing and you get the feeling that this author really knows about ships and sailing. Of course it helps the journey to have a naiad, Niri, changing the tide from time to time.

The main characters are under 20 (if you don’t count the tree-being Darag, who is considered young in his own community) and they are full of angst over boyfriend/girlfriend possibilities and over brother/sister arguments and little jealousies. Romance is innocent and starry-eyed, although the cultural difficulties of falling in love with a tree-person add some welcome dilemmas. I think a young adult reader would identify more with these emotions than I did; I find brother Ty’s possessive attitude to sister Lavinia highly irritating. There are times when I would like to remind the group that they are on a mission and that they are wasting time on petty sulks – but that is a reflection on my jaded 57 years.

I do think there are way too many significant looks and gestures, and that cutting three-quarters of these out completely would improve the pace without losing any of the emotion. The reader doesn’t need every blink and hand movement described.
(reviewed long after purchase)

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