BDSM: Trial And Error

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Rated 1.63/5 based on 9 reviews
Good subs are hard to come by. They must be nurtured and trained properly. When you develop the right one, she is a treasure to be cherished. More
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Fiction » Erotica » BDSM
Words: 5,050
Language: English
ISBN: 9781458044846
About Ernest Winchester


I must in all honesty, update this entry, for I stumbled onto the magic key to post a story on Smashwords. It was operator error not one of the poltergeist that I’m sure came preloaded in my computer that prevents me from getting what I want from it. For those of you who didn’t read this bio before—which I’m sure includes the rest of the world’s population—I repeat: I am an old man who loves to write. I started decades ago—the exact number is irrelevant—on a cast iron framed manual typewriter that would now serve little purpose beyond a boat anchor. I love composing fiction on the computer, mainly because of the spell check feature. Why someone who can’t spell worth a damn wants to write, I’ll never be able to explain. I take solace in the knowledge that some well-known writers throughout history were so afflicted. However, I must confess, that is about as far as I can go into this—to me—frightening world of cyberspace. I don’t have accounts on face book (wouldn’t touch it with a ten-foot pole. Almost nightly the news is filled with stories of people murdered by people they have contacted there.) I feel the same way about Myspace, a blog or personal web site. I don’t tweet or twit or what ever that is. That really seems silly--just call them and talk! So I’ll be contented to write and enjoy retirement until the final heartbeat or wayward city buss runs me over.

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Reviews

Review by: Rose Masters on March 18, 2014 :
After reading it I have to agree with Judith, the ending was as tasteless as some of Ernest's front covers... and that says a lot. Maybe it's time to ditch that disgusting rubber on the apple eh?
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Review by: Judith Lee on Aug. 24, 2013 :
What is with that ending? It made me laugh, but I'm not sure if I was supposed to. It seems like it could have been better, but the author tried to throw us off with that sudden and unlikely conclusion. Also quite a few typos that need to be fixed!

Oh, and if you don't like what you call retaliation reviews, maybe you should think twice before you blast someone else's story, especially in a genre you admit to not liking! That is YOUR problem, not theirs.
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Review by: Vera Roberts on May 28, 2012 :
I have to agree with the other reviewers. If you don't know anything about the BDSM lifestyle, you shouldn't write about it, fiction or not. The way the Dom is written is a joke. He's not Dominant; he's just a masochist. Yes, there's a difference.

Sad because this story had a lot of potential to be great.
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Review by: Blue Sleighty on March 13, 2012 :
Erotica written by people who have never experienced what they are trying to write about is always poor. This is yet another example of that. Don't bother.
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Review by: Blue Sleighty on March 13, 2012 : (no rating)
Erotica written by people who have never experienced what they are writing about is always poor. This is just one more.
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Review by: Graffiti Girl Incorporated on Jan. 11, 2012 :
This guy does not know BDSM from cybersex, poorly written and just made me go to sleep.
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Review by: Ashley Mira on Dec. 30, 2010 :
I'm really confused by this story. I felt so sorry for the sub most of the way through it because the Dom acted like a total ass...constantly talking over her, being dismissive about anything she said that he didn't like, etc. It especially bothered me that he didn't like seeing her smile or hearing her giggle. She seemed like a young, vibrant, inexperienced sub ripe for the picking, while he seemed like an old, stagnant, arrogant man who didn't care to put forth the effort to learn who she really was and how to help her reach her potential.
The last scene in the hotel room left me with questions, and maybe it was meant to. There's no way to know why the sub acted the way she did, but I can think of a few reasons. All of those reasons point to a huge lapse of communication between Dom and sub up to that point.
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Review by: KL Joy on Nov. 27, 2010 :
Another BDSM story with the Dom so full of his own self importance he forgot to gain the subs trust before diving in at the deep end ... seems a little trite!
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Review by: Nuala Breckenridge on Nov. 04, 2010 :
The book was very well written, the characters believable and the plot imaginitve and easy to follow. However, I feel that there could have been a bit more to the story, which is why I'm giving it four stars. Good work and best of luck with your next work.
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