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Review by:
anita colonia
on May 08, 2013 :
I feel so ambivalent about this book. I am giving it 3 starts because thats the closest I can get to 2.5 stars.
On one hand, as other readers have found, the book is rife with all kinds of errors. I can't stand even a few in a book. This book is LOADED with spelling, grammatical and tense errors. What the heck is the deal with all the past/present tense issues? It drove me crazy. The book gets ZERO stars because of that. I usually won't even bother to read a book beyond a few pages if things are that bad.
On the other hand, the story was SO GOOD that I was compelled to keep reading. The author has some fascinating ideas, i.e., the "item". I lost sleep 2 or three nights in a row (my boss says thank you very much H. Lee Morgan)because I had to find out happens next in each chapter. The book gets 5 stars for that.
It averages out to 2.5, so I rounded it all off to 3 stars.
I hate the idea of spending $5.00 on a sequel, but will inevitably give in at some point cause I just have to have more of Alex, Lily and Shade.
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Review by:
Pat Young
on March 31, 2013 :
I also really enjoyed this book despite the spelling and grammatical errors. A strong storyline, good characters and continuity. I look forward to reading the sequel shortly. An author to follow.
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Review by:
Nicole Gray
on Oct. 27, 2012 :
I also agree that this book would benefit from being edited, but that does not take away from it being an immersing story, that grabbed my attention from beginning to end. I have just bought the 2nd book and can't wait to get started.
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Review by:
thiotes
on Sep. 24, 2012 :
(no rating)
I agree with Tam wholeheartedly. Especially the continuous use of the present tense in between took away my immersion. Its a little sad because the story is great.
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Review by:
Tam Winn
on Sep. 17, 2012 :
I enjoyed reading this book quite a bit more then I expected to. There are continual grammar errors throughout the book along with tense (past and present) getting mixed up. I usually can't read books with a lot of errors as I get frustrated but the story for this book kept me reading. It was fascinating. With an editor's help, I believe this book could go from being a good read to a great read.
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