I am a young and new author trying to see how much people like my work and my books. I am publishing on smashwords to make some money on the side and see how much people like my work. Please offer creative criticism for i will build on that. Also, most of the books are made in a 24 hour time period, so please keep that in mind while you read these books.
A Great Discovery
Book in Progress, Corrupted Minds (Not going to be put on website due to a on going competition)
on Oct. 19, 2013 :
This kid is trying and he has potential, but the narrative is painful, troped and strange.
It needs work... All of Ton's two shorts need work ("A Great Discovery" reads like a 'Twilight Zone' episode on a bad day).
(review of free book)