No Going Back

Adult
Rated 4.00/5 based on 2 reviews
A young man makes an emotional return to the Welsh farm where he was evacuated to during the Second World War and finds that the past is something that can never be wholly recaptured. More
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About David Blake

David Blake was born in the northwest of England in 1970 and grew up on a diet of Marvel comics, 2000 AD and television sci-fi. He has been writing for as long as he can remember and remains an avid reader. His other interests include travelling, vintage British television programmes, vintage cinema, football, eating toast and even having the occasional drink.

If David Blake has reviewed your work on Smashwords, please do not take any criticism to heart. He tries to be unbiased and constructive, and will only award 5 stars to the absolute best works, which will be rare.

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Review by: Catherine E. Chapman on Nov. 10, 2012 :
I was drawn to 'No Going Back' amongst David Blake's works because of the book's categorisations as historical fiction and erotica - it seemed an intriguing generic combination.

The first thing to say about 'No Going Back' is that it is well-written. In particular, I like the fact that the first person narrator's voice seems authentic for the time in which the book is set. Furthermore, the great level of descriptive detail in Blake's writing serves to set the scene in post-WWII rural Wales very effectively.

Reading 'No Going Back' it does feel rather like a book in two halves: the first part is a fairly gentle reminiscence, which would have universal appeal to adult readers; the second part is undoubtedly correctly classified as erotica and some readers may be uncomfortable with the juxtaposition of the two distinct elements of the story.

I enjoyed reading 'No Going Back' for what it was but I felt the story had scope to be developed in ways that would blend the narrative and romantic content in ways that would make the overall work more meaningful. As it stands, 'No Going Back' is technically a novelette. If Blake wanted to develop it as a novel or novella, there seem to be many avenues to explore. Personally, I was intrigued by the character of David - surely the fact that he reads suggests that he isn't the insensitive oaf he seems to be? What does he recall of his childhood friendship with Rob? What did it mean to him?

Overall, 'No Going Back' suggests that David Blake is a gifted writer with the potential to pursue many genres of fiction writing successfully.
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Review by: Travis Ford on Oct. 13, 2012 : (no rating)
I really thank you for your review on my little piece, A Killer Is Looking for You.
The piece was not initially intended to be long. The story is really to warn people there are killers in the world. Read the murder mystery and you will learn more on how a killer thinks.
As far as how you say, the writing, I believe there are many people on here that are amatures. In due time, everyone will improve, however I do have that one five star rating.
I am working to make the piece longer and more thrilling possibly a novel or shorter work, perhaps a novella.
Thank you for you review anyway. I am glad somebody is reading what I wrote.
Thank you again with respect and look for a much longer version of the story coming soon.
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