My pen name is John Eider. I work full time and write at evenings and weekends.
I've been writing for several years now; a mental magpie, I change genre a lot, most recently writing an office drama, detective fiction and adventures. I have four books on Smashwords:
– Playing Truant
– Late of the Payroll
– Not a Very Nice Woman
– The Night the Lights Went Out
I write because I have characters, scenes and stories on my mind, and need a stage for them to play on. I hope you enjoy reading them.
on Sep. 05, 2013 :
Of all the books I've read this year, this is one of the most difficult to rate and classify. It's an intense read, densely written, heavy and realistic; but at the same time it's hopeful and light on its feet. The ending is left open, as if for a sequel, but because of the realism factor there's no other way it could possibly have ended.
The climax is strong and satisfying, but the denouement and falling action drag on a bit. It's possible the story would be stronger with a couple thousand words chopped off the end; but it wouldn't be the same book and the effect on the reader would be neither as heavy nor as hopeful.
The characterization is excellent. The author could use a professional copy editor or at least a good proofreader, and there are some sentences where I never did figure out a satisfactory meaning. But even when it threw me out of the story, there was never any question but that I'd dive back into it.
If you like post-apocalyptic fiction without the tired tropes of nuclear holocaust or zombies, well, I've read worse. Much worse. And I guess that answers the how-many-stars question: this story will stay with me. Knock off one for the lack of proofreading and the questionability of those ending chapters, then let's say four stars and one contented if wondering reader.
(review of free book)
on Aug. 16, 2013 :
A frightening scenario well depicted through the eyes of a young soldier on a mission through the dangerous countryside of a Britain without electricity.
A well told story, where the reader quickly empathises with the soldier. The hardships and dangers are nicely documented, and I found myself genuinely caring for our hero, and hoping he would eventually find happiness with the woman he encounters in a commune.
The ending is just right in paving the way for a sequel.
If the author does continue the adventures of this young soldier, I will definitely be reading them.
(review of free book)