About A Girl

Adult
Rated 3.67/5 based on 3 reviews
My take on the "twist ending" genre. Nothing you haven't seen/read before, but it's only 5 pages long and it's kind of happening around Christmas, so give it a go.
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Price: Free! USD
Words: 2,350
Language: English
ISBN: 9781301484812

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Review by: kari cook on Jan. 15, 2013 :
This was an interesting little story. Not sure if I quite understood it all and it does have some twists and turns. It is a quick read and enjoyable.
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Review by: Top Kapi on Dec. 17, 2012 :
I have to say I don't normally get far with stories in the present tense but after a few paragraphs this drops back into the past tense so I kept on reading. Not sure about that start, it was a bit disconcerting, but it seemed to be a powerful situation developing. The writing was confidently presented and the dialogue convincing. Yes, a twist ending, just a little underpowered I felt, not quite the shock that might have been hoped for, but overall it was a well-constructed short story.
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Review by: Jamie J. Buchanan on Dec. 17, 2012 :
I wish the author was less self-deprecating in the description of this story - it is a LOT better than he suggests! Well written, this story kept me involved and interested. The ending wasn't a complete twist (most people will probably pick it), but that doesn't matter. the point, I think, is to tell a tale well and Shelby has done that here. Like your style dude - well done.
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