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A profilic writer of quality smut, Chris Bellows has published some three million words of strong D/s erotica... http://chrisbellows.blogspot.com http://www.lulu.com http://www.eroticbooknetwork.com.
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on April 18, 2013 :
've read now four of Chris Bellows' works, starting with this one, which, being gratis and focusing on a particular kinky interest I have, male milking, I found engrossing. And engrossing it was. Its conception of young men who are kept in bondage for the sole purpose of milking them for their sperm is not original. What is original is the clinical detail with which it is approached, the fact that it avoids the usual cliche of milking the stud still he's empty. Yes, it does so, but then the milking stops, awaiting the recharge by the testicles and prostate, and during that period the young man is anaesthetized, fed by a nasal tube to the stomach and has his body maintained with care entirely while he is unconscious. Thus his only reality consists of those brief intervals when he is conscious for the masturbation and the resultant orgasm. For many it would seem a life of total bliss. But one wonders how empty it must also be. A life devoid of all those other things that fill up our lives, reduced to the simple act of buildup and orgasm and then the return to unconsciousness that quickly follows. There is something chillingly attractive about it.
Yet there are questions I have, questions that would like to see Mr Bellows expand this conception. We have this initial story, and then two sequels, one of which I've read, that follow the young man after his release from the unnamed institution. But the questions I have are of what came first. How was he procured? Was he lured into a situation whose reality betrayed the attractions placed before him? Was he simply abducted? One would really like to know how he came to be in that place? And also, one would perhaps like to see a larger work which focuses on more than one of the 'donors' in that place, comparing them in terms of how they react to the situation in which they find themselves. Are they all as readily compliant as the lad we see in this story? There are many possibilities here, and considering this is easily the most original approach to male milking I have ever encountered in fiction, gay or straight (my own orientation is strictly gay but this story fitted readily within the bounds of tolerance I have for essentially heterosexual works), it is a story that really begs for expansion, for the setting and process are as interesting as the one character we encounter here. One would really like a full tour of the facility and its operations.
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