Published: Dec. 29, 2012
Words: 54,487 (approximate)
Language: English
ISBN: 9781301828012

Short description

Sal Rocco is a man no one dares cross. But five people have done just that, and now they must pay with their lives. But the man sent to carry out Rocco's vengeance has a plan of his own; a plan that inlcudes money, violence and the ultimate tool of persuasion: sex. Some will live. Some will die. But each will discover that in the world of murder-for-hire, all that glitters is not gold.

Extended description

Please, any and all readers, I need your help. I would like to turn this novella into a full-blown novel. Please read the first 19 chapters, and give me guidance on where you think it should go from there. I'd love to have your input, as I want to write a story not only for myself but for you as well.

Please consider these areas: Is there too much sex? Not enough? Is the content too graphic, or should I spice it up even more? Are there characters you would change/delete/enhance? With the success of Fifty Shades of Gray, I feel like well-written erotica has its place in literature, especially when combined with a murder-for-hire scenario.

Thanks!

Sal Rocco is a man no one dares cross. But five people have done just that, and now they must pay with their lives. But the man sent to carry out Rocco's vengeance has a plan of his own; a plan that inlcudes money, violence and the ultimate tool of persuasion: sex. Some will live. Some will die. But each will discover that in the world of.. (Read more) Please, any and all readers, I need your help. I would like to turn this novella into a full-blown novel. Please read the first 19 chapters, and give me guidance on where you think it should go from there. I'd love to have your input, as I want to write a story not only for myself but for you as well.

Please consider these areas: Is there too much sex? Not enough? Is the content too graphic, or should I spice it up even more? Are there characters you would change/delete/enhance? With the success of Fifty Shades of Gray, I feel like well-written erotica has its place in literature, especially when combined with a murder-for-hire scenario.

Thanks!

Sal Rocco is a man no one dares cross. But five people have done just that, and now they must pay with their lives. But the man sent to carry out Rocco's vengeance has a plan of his own; a plan that inlcudes money, violence and the ultimate tool of persuasion: sex. Some will live. Some will die. But each will discover that in the world of murder-for-hire, all that glitters is not gold.
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mystery, action adventure, locke glitters erotica thriller crime

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Review by: theresa brookes on March 03, 2013 :
What the heck, i had just got settled in to the book and it stopped, please finish the rest as it was looking good.
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Review by: Audrey Friesen on Feb. 24, 2013 :
What the heck...where's the rest of the book? Should maybe indicate in the description that the book isn't finished. Oh and when you do finish it, please have someone edit it for spelling/grammar. I'm a stickler for it and found many mistakes in each chapter. But otherwise, good story so far.
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Review by: KD Smith on Feb. 13, 2013 :
Loved the book- the first part, waiting on the rest… Loved the jumping back and forth between events, sex, characters, action, everything leaves you on the edge waiting for the other shoe to drop. With the cop dead and his brother that worked for Sal Rocco and the other victims dead with a tie to Rocco, I’m waiting for the cops to show up to investigate the cop death and talk to Patricia Forrester, where Max over hears everything and now he wonders about Goldman’s death and realizes he may be in trouble also. One thing I would ask is that you PROOF READ. You have left out words that could complete a thought or sentence, where we as readers have had to put in the word(s) to make everything work. There are also places where there are the same words repeating themselves to many times. Keep it up - waiting on the finished chapters!
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Review by: aramide on Jan. 18, 2013 :
Everything so far is fine, actually better than fine. Carry on pls, don't mind us, just keep writing but pls give us a warning next time if the book is gonna stop in the middle. I am looking forward to the continuation of the book.
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Review by: george gall on Jan. 09, 2013 :
hey,,you're doing great. please continue...i was very disappointed when the book just 'stopped'..
the sex is fine, the characters are fine, your writing is fine.
thanks
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Review by: heartbreak on Jan. 05, 2013 :
LOVED THIS BOOK, PLEASE CONTINUE WITH MORE, LOOKING FORWARD TO BOOK......
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Review by: heartbreak on Jan. 05, 2013 :
LOVED THIS BOOK, PLEASE CONTINUE WITH MORE, LOOKING FORWARD TO BOOK......
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Review by: heartbreak on Jan. 05, 2013 :
LOVED THIS BOOK, PLEASE CONTINUE WITH MORE, LOOKING FORWARD TO BOOK......
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