My books are intended for singles, couples, lesbians, and those who are bi-curious - in fact, pretty much anyone who likes to read about one sexy woman seducing another. I emphasize good quality writing, and building up the sexual tension. Enjoy!
on Jan. 22, 2013 :
I hate to say it but, like its title, this story is somewhat lackluster. It has an awkward narrative style. Tension in the narrative is often swiftly undermined by the phrasing, which tends to overstate the obvious. And what's with all the parentheses? They're used far too often for a piece of fiction, and are frequently used improperly.
The lead, Bella, sees no problem at all in cheating on her husband. She doesn't even give the ethics of her choice any thought. Such a dilemma could have been a great avenue for developing tension and exploring Bella's character, but it went unused.
Over all, I found it very difficult to get a sense of the characters' personalities. They failed to talk about, or even think about, anything interesting. By the time the sex came around, I found it difficult to care what happened.
I apologize for the negativity in my review, but I do think it's more important to be honest.
(review of free book)