Hi my name is Kenny Hartwick and I live in Portland, Michigan. I enjoy basketball and track and sometimes football. My favorite teams are the Michigan Wolverines and Detroit Lions. I also enjoy writing realistic fiction books.
on Feb. 28, 2013 :
A stream of consciousness that was a little overwhelming to read, mostly because the sentences kept going and going and going, I felt like I needed to stop for air. Whether this was intentional or not for the characterisation, I'm not sure.
There were multiple issues with tense and a lot of contradictions in the narrative which interrupted the reading experience.
On a positive note, I liked the plot. I very much enjoy stories about unusual topics and situations, and an FBI agent being shot by their doctor, is a little unusual. Not too sure if I would call it realistic fiction though...
(review of free book)