Folks, all my books are for free this week on Smashwords because it's National Library Week!
Use these coupons and get everything before the week is up.
Super Anybody (Book 2): YA94N
Super Everybody (Book 3): CP29G
Bagged in Korea (1 part adventure, 1 part travelogue): KY59M
The Long Road Home (Dark futuristic spy novella): JZ34Q
From the Desk of Col. Garrett Ross (13 dark spy stories): YD35W
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Brent is a husband, father, teacher, writer, and sometimes artist living in Seoul Korea, originally from Detroit, Michigan. Brent reads Stephen King, Brandon Mull, Jim Butcher, and a hundred others. You should too.
Find some horror: Deadlines (Comet Press)
Find some dark sci-fi: Breaking Benjamin
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*If you're like me and you don't like to be cheated, please don't use Authorhouse.com. In fact, since finding Smashwords I intend to republish 'Breaking Benjamin' in its entirety here soon enough, and I'm also looking for a print publisher, if you'd like to have one on an actual bookshelf.
Francis W. Porretto
on Feb. 09, 2013 :
Aha! Drop ships and powered armor? A ground trooper lieutenant on the same ship with his father? Do I detect a little Starship Troopers influence in there somewhere?
I don't recall another of your stories written in present tense. You handled it well, except for the usual stippling of going-too-fast low-level errors. (Is it Rochet or Trochet? And watch out for those FLECHETTES.) If I have a quibble other than that, it would be that though there's quite a lot of bloodshed, there doesn't appear to be a point -- a theme.
Is this to be part of another group of stories united around a single backstory and setting?
(For a particularly technoidal take on this sort of combat, you might enjoy Travis S. Taylor's "One Day on Mars," "The Tau Ceti Agenda," and "One Good Soldier.")
(review of free book)