Breakfast In Bed

Rated 4.60/5 based on 15 reviews
Erotic Romance flash fiction story - about 600 words in length.

Julie isn't a morning person, but her husband Nick knows just the right way to wake her up.
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Words: 800
Language: English
ISBN: 9781301937127
About Robert Zimmermann

Robert has been writing poetry since the eleventh grade. His writing started as impulsive rambling, but soon became a passion. A few years later he attended SUNY Potsdam where he received a B.A. in Creative Writing.
His main focus is poetry, but at times you can find him dabbling in short fiction. Robert has also created the blog A Life Among The Pages, where he posts his writing as well as book reviews.
When he’s not reading or writing, Robert enjoys spending time with his dog, Deuc. Deuc ran out of the woods in August 2011 and they have been inseparable ever since.

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Review by: Susi Martin on Dec. 30, 2014 :
Wow, now that is the right way to start off the day, Brilliant writing. Well written stories capture the reader and draw them into the scene. You did just that in a short story. I'd love to read more about this loving couple. :)
(review of free book)

Review by: Marcia Carrington on July 29, 2013 :
This is an intimate, well-paced short story of a married couple, and exemplifies their definition of the concept of 'Breakfast in Bed'. The only drawback is that while the story makes its points pertinently, it would have been interesting to have had more back story about the couple, and what makes them tick, but what is presented is sufficient for its purposes.
(reviewed within a month of purchase)

Review by: Kayla Lords on July 27, 2013 :
To me, good erotica should affect the imagination and the body. He accomplishes both in a very short amount of time.

For a first timer, this is pretty good! The tell-tale sign of a good story? I wanted to read more! Hopefully, his next work will be a bit longer.
(reviewed the day of purchase)

Review by: Jenna Fox on July 16, 2013 :
I was very pleased to read/review the erotic short story "Breakfast In Bed" by R. Zimmerman.
I thought the writing was very good, although, it was extremely short in length. As a personal preference (as a reader) I feel the author probably could have developed the characters a little more, but for a 600 piece, I am very aware how difficult that is to do.
This is the author's first erotic piece and I feel he has a lot of potential in the erotic genre. Erotic writing is a craft in and of itself and must be honed just like every other genre.
Hopefully Zimmerman will build on this story in the future.
(reviewed the day of purchase)

Review by: Kim Stapf on June 23, 2013 :
What a great way to wake. I've read Robs poetry, he's real about what he writes. His erotic short is no different, tasteful writing about a husband and wife loving their mornings together. Sweet!
(reviewed the day of purchase)

Review by: Chrisi on May 21, 2013 :
What a vivid snapshot of real life! Sexy. Steamy without being vulgar. Zimmerman has what it takes, The hook to pull you in and the story to keep you there. Next time I hope he tries to triple the words or better yet go for a novel.
(reviewed the day of purchase)

Review by: Suzy Ayers on May 11, 2013 :
I loved this sinfully sexy short. Mmm yes I'd be happy to wake up to this myself. Julie I think was playing asleep ;)I was reading along literally groaned out loud wanting more. I flipped back and forth in my kindle...I need more...
(reviewed within a week of purchase)

Review by: A Voracious Reader on April 04, 2013 :
Nick likes breakfast in bed. Julie enjoys being breakfast in bed.

Well-written, sweet yet steamy this short will make you smile wickedly and say, 'Please, Sir, may I have another?'

Book source: Picked up for free on Smashwords.
(reviewed long after purchase)

Review by: Lori Meckley on March 27, 2013 :
This was a nice short, romantic but very sexy read. I think this short could turn into really nice long story...just saying
(reviewed within a month of purchase)

Review by: Shanna S on March 01, 2013 :
I'm a fan of this author's poetry, which I highly recommend checking out if you haven't already, and I was excited to see he had written a fiction short story. I loved it! It was sexy and lovely and read like his poetry to me. I'm very much looking forward to anything else he writes.
(reviewed the day of purchase)

Review by: S.M. Boyce on Feb. 28, 2013 :
Breakfast in Bed is a fast but fun read that has the perfect blend of sexy and sweet. It’s well worth the few cents to buy it. I particularly liked the narrator’s voice. Despite the fact that it’s labeled as erotica, there is a backstory to the lustful elements that makes you smile. It’s only 600 words so I can’t really say much more without spoiling it, but I CAN say that this comes highly recommended.
(reviewed within a week of purchase)

Review by: Charity Parkerson on Feb. 27, 2013 :
Very hot for such a short piece. I can't wait to see where the author takes these characters next.
(reviewed the day of purchase)

Review by: Kristy Atkinson on Feb. 26, 2013 :
This was a great taste of what's to come for this author (yeah, yeah pun intended)! For flash fiction this was great. It's not often that I get to read erotica from a man's POV and certainly not from a male author and it was well done.
(reviewed the day of purchase)

Review by: Nicole Ryan on Feb. 26, 2013 :
Robert has told a great little erotic tale with this first work, short, sweet, and to the point, it get's you ready for more, which I look forward to from this Author.
(reviewed the day of purchase)

Review by: Cinta Garcia de la Rosa on Feb. 26, 2013 :
For being a first attempt to write erotica, I think it was a good one. It's flash fiction, so it is very short, but it gets straight to the point. A short piece about a couple enjoying their very own "breakfast in bed", as they start their morning in a very exciting way.
(reviewed the day of purchase)

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