Erin

By Tess Mackenzie
$0.00 Rating: 1 star1 star1 star1 star
(4.00 based on 2 reviews)

Published: March 13, 2013
Words: 2,935 (approximate)
Language: English
ISBN: 9781301193523


Short description

Short story (2731 words). As their relationship begins, two women spend the night together. Lauren feels close to Erin, but isn’t sure how to tell Erin she really likes her. Erin is feeling the same, and asks Lauren to do something with her they haven’t done before -------- This is way too short to ask people for money, but also feels complete as it is, so here you go. Free. Adult content.

Extended description

Short story (2731 words).

As their relationship begins, two women spend the night together. Lauren feels close to Erin, but isn’t sure how to tell Erin she really likes her. Erin is feeling the same, and asks Lauren to do something with her they haven’t done before.

Lauren, falling for Erin, trusting her, says yes.

This is way too short to ask people for money, but it’s also complete like this and I don’t want to add anything. So here you go, free. And as always, thank you so much for the support. Everyone here is very kind and generous.

Adult content.

Adult-content rating: This book contains content considered unsuitable for young readers 17 and under, and which may be offensive to some readers of all ages. For more information, see the Support FAQ.

Tags

romance, love, lesbian, anal play, affection, ass licking, analingus

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Reviews

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Review by: Michael on March 18, 2013 : star star star star
There was something about this little story that really got to me. It was a combination of the verbal interaction between the two women, which was endearing, and the way the topic of rimming was approached, which was very loving. True, there were more than a few typos, and sometimes the dialog seemed bumpy, but when it was over I found myself thinking that I would like to read about them again, to see what else they share with each other. That is very rare for erotica, and refreshing.
(review of free book)

Review by: Ernest Winchester on March 13, 2013 : star star star star
Tess, you’ve begged and begged, so now I’m going to give it to you. I liked your story, maybe even loved it. Ass play can be fantastic and reading about it can be as well. So I’ll give your story four stars. Why not five? Well there were some errors—not many and not so bad as to be distracting.
Also, your listing all, or most, of the other stories as ‘you set the price.’ I don’t like that. If you want paid, say so. Put a price, be bold. Now that I’ve seen a little of your work I might go ahead and buy one. I’m sure that is what you were after, putting this one for free. Sneaky.
Keep up the good work.
(review of free book)

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