The Cocoon Called Conscience

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13:34 Fables is a collection of short stories with deeper meanings. The Cocoon Called Conscience is the free story available with this download. Phillip is about to hatch his Guidence, a creature who guides his every thought. But when he is not diligent about what goes into his Guidence the outcome is nothing short of a nightmare. Buy the complete version at www.1334fables.com More
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Words: 5,900
Language: English
ISBN: 9781301317363
About Isaiah Basye

I'm currently a elementary school teacher, but I love to write and act. I have been a main character on TBN's The Lads TV. I was also a contracted actor for Christ In Youth's Superstart and an MC for their Move conference. I have written a book of Biblical parables, but the stories are fantasy and science fiction. I call them 13:34 Fables. The website is www.1334fables.com.

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Review by: Victoria Montes on March 16, 2013 :
Interesting story very imaginative. I think it could be longer to make it easier to visualize. I had to go back to see if the guidance had left the cocoon before after Veron talked to Philip but decided it was all from a distance. I do think it could benefit from some revision. There are a few major typos like a voice spoke in his mind in agreement. Two prepositions tacked on to the end makes the reader stop and think about the word order instead of the story so maybe a voice in his mind spoke. There is one tense change from past to present on about the 3 page that jarred me as a reader. Another one due to the face that. Typo made me stop. Clearing those up would be a good idea.
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