Cheryl's Gym Teacher: A Story of Passion and Patience in Mid-Life

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Rated 4.50/5 based on 2 reviews
Cheryl is lonely aka horny. She's divorced and without a steady man. She's a dance teacher and should be the object of someone's fantasies. But it's been five long years. Danny, the school lacrosse coach, is getting divorced. He returns to his daughter's old dance studio to find his dream woman is as hot and intriguing as ever. Things heat up as Danny scores over and over again winning Cheryl! More
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Words: 18,120
Language: English
ISBN: 9781301382903
About Maura Rossi

Maura Rossi is a storyteller of erotic love. She writes about real people, real circumstances and real happenings. She fictionalizes and fantasizes about the outcomes and puts them to paper (digitally speaking of course).

Maura loves cooking, dance, theater, music, all beaches, debating, and men. She would enjoy all those activities if she had the time. For now she writes and works two jobs. After a lifetime of following rules, Maura has decided to cut loose and explore a side of her that she didn't know existed.

She only began reading romances in the last few years, never having been much of a fiction person. Her favorites have been historical stories set in the Highlands, with impossibly big Scotsmen, though she is now reading a bit from other sub genres. Sweet talking cowboys and Alpha-type werewolves lately!

Too shy for an editor at this point. Loves the idea of anonymous feedback and fan driven changes.

"Please give me lots of feedback. I welcome all comments and criticism. Enjoy and thanks."

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Reviews

Review by: Alex Barton on July 29, 2013 :
Ms Rossi, you asked for reader's comments so:

Take care when you change point-of-view quickly: it can be confusing for the reader to be in Cheryl's mind and then, in the next paragraph, Danny's.

The sex scenes were wonderful: explicit, erotic, just the right amount of awareness of what turns the reader on by who is doing what to whom. The sexual detail (e.g. when Cheryl checks herself out in the mirror) was really arousing.

Maybe it's just me but I don't want reality in an erotic story so I hate when characters discuss condoms/say 'I'm clean' so they can ride bareback. I want - need - bareback because cum/spurting climaxes are deeply erotic: condoms aren't. Entirely your choice but it's obvious you like to write down-and-dirty which safe sex isn't...

Do I want lots of romantic entanglements, soul-searching, the realisation that love will win through? I would happily cut all that by 50% because what works for you works for me: a sexy couple who can't keep their hands off each other getting it on as often as possible. Tears dripping down a face or another bodily fluid - well, which would you choose..?

Hope these comments are constructive/helpful - and very much looking forward to your next story.
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Review by: hrhsophia on May 19, 2013 :
Man the heat between these two jumped off the pages! Very nicely written as always by an always stellar writer.
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