The Broken Needles

Rated 3.25/5 based on 4 reviews
Two grandmothers, one little girl. After hiding the truth for thirteen years, they finally had to reveal it, loud and clear. After all, the destiny of the entire community was in the girl's hands. The question is: would she accept it as hers? More
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Words: 2,620
Language: English
ISBN: 9781301702718
About Arch DeNight

"What is a word but combination of letters? Jumbled and juggled by the writer's mind. One thing I know for sure is, words, for me, are an amazing escapade. Being typed, being read, being said, all the same. An escapade. To the world of everything and nothing at the same time."

Arch DeNight is a young woman who likes to think, to talk, and to type about many things. Having a degree in Psychology, she doesn't think that she understands human better than before having one. Human being, for her, is not a book that can be read--but they can always be observed for fun. Currently residing in a tropical Southeast Asian country, she spends her time playing online games, daydreaming, typing, and of course... making contact with other human beings.

Contact her through: arch.denight@gmail.com
She'll be very happy to hear anything you have in mind, especially the ones related to her writings :-)

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Reviews

Review by: Ernest Winchester on Dec. 03, 2013 :
Cute.
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Review by: David Blake on July 12, 2013 :
This was a good story idea, but it's a bit rough around the edges. The mystery starts to build up nicely but then we're suddenly given all the answers in a couple of lengthy speeches, which is the most unsatisfying way to resolve it. I'd have preferred not to have been told everything, just to have been given hints and clues.
Also the story starts off as though we're following Emily as the main character, then it just sort of switches to her grandparents.
There were several punctuation and spelling errors too.
Overall, this had the potential to be a 4 or even a 5, but in this form it only merits a 3.
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Review by: Michener 78 on June 14, 2013 :
Good short story. I was entertained and don't want to say more and give away the plot.
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Review by: Jeffry Diamond on June 08, 2013 :
Good writing combined with an original premise; although the witches' dialogue was a bit juvenile at times. Overall however a good read. The Broken Needles witches are interesting characters. At the end I found myself wanting to read more about them. Hopefully DeNight will write more Broken Needles stories.
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