I'm also a fan of video games, RPGs, comics, Star Wars (and sci-fi in general), anime, and martial arts (MMA, classic kung fu movies, boxing, etc).
Francis W. Porretto
on June 19, 2013 :
Oh my God.
This is wildly funny, and quite original. I was going to say that it deserves further development, but perhaps it should be left as it is – minus the handful ot typos and misspellings, of course.
The only comparably imaginative super-power I can remember is from Larry Niven’s “A Gift From Earth,” in which his protagonist discovers that he has a psi power over the muscles that control the irises of others’ eyes...and nothing else! Yours is quite a distance from anything I’ve seen before in this vein. Bravo!
(review of free book)