Lost Souls

Adult
Rated 4.00/5 based on 2 reviews
When Father O'Neill receives a mysterious visitor in St Mary's Church, he hopes that he can set her back on the right path. However, as he talks to her, he slowly comes to realise that perhaps she isn't the only one who needs salvation... More
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Price: Free! USD
Words: 3,430
Language: British English
ISBN: 9781301481088
About David Blake

David Blake was born in the northwest of England in 1970 and grew up on a diet of Marvel comics, 2000 AD and television sci-fi. He has been writing for as long as he can remember and remains an avid reader. His other interests include travelling, vintage British television programmes, vintage cinema, football, eating toast and even having the occasional drink.

If David Blake has reviewed your work on Smashwords, please do not take any criticism to heart. He tries to be unbiased and constructive, and will only award 5 stars to the absolute best works, which will be rare.

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Reviews

Review by: Shawn O'Toole on Sep. 18, 2013 :
A poignant tale of the human condition as it is on the INSIDE. Interesting how we all have our own "drugs" and must overcome our addictions if we are to be free. The characters were well developed for such a short story. The dialog was real and wonderfully human. The surprises were VERY surprising but made complete sense. So as not to spoil the tale, I shall discreetly comment that the personal observations of Father O'Neil created and impressive empathy without confusing the reader.
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Review by: Michael Carter on July 23, 2013 :
Again, the writing here is very good, amid an ambiguous story of a meeting in a lonely church. The tale leaves you asking questions as to what has happenned; not always a good thing, but here for the right reasons. It's very readable, interesting, and at one point I thought it was going to slide into blasphemous erotica [Blake's story "Tiffany" also lingers on the cusp of erotica]. Good story, worth a read.

To be a pedant, I noticed a "hear" instead of "here", a mere typing error really and an unusual error in Blake's work, and at one point, the girl says "Still, it's rather late.." and this tiny little bit of dialogue ["rather"] seemed out of character for her.
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