The Invisible War

Rated 2.00/5 based on 2 reviews
Short story about space marines, alien mutants, and love. More
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About Stephen Landry

Stephen Landry is a 26 year old graphic designer living in Nashville,Tn. His work has been seen on tv, in magazines, and on the web. Current projects include writing a full length novel and creating illustrations and cover art for up and coming authors, video game companies, and film studios.

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Review By: jorowi
Good concept but poor execution
2.5 out of 5 stars. See my review for full details.

Review by: David Blake on Dec. 30, 2013 :
I found this a real struggle to get through, in spite of its short length. There's a story in there, a story which should be exciting, dramatic, moving because it's full of action and incident... But as a reader I just had no sense of connection to anything that was going on. The entire story is told in a dry, matter-of-fact style, there's no character, no feeling, no soul to it.
So unfortunately I have to apply the harshest criticism I can to a story and say it was just... boring. You've clearly got the imagination, and the writing ability, but you need to find a way to make your story engage the reader. If you're relating a dramatic event, the reader has to feel the drama, not feel as though they may as well have just been reading a laborious description of somebody buttering a slice of toast.
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Review by: James Jenkins on July 19, 2013 : (no rating)
I kind of feel obligated to write something, as there are no existing reviews.

I read it but, the story never really grabbed my attention.
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