Big Girl Love - Erotica Romance Short Story

Adult
Rated 3.50/5 based on 8 reviews
I had no idea how exciting or sensual a voluptuous woman could be until I met Kelly. Everything about her is nothing like I was expecting. Her soft round breast, sleek curvy hips and large warm thighs, sent me on a sensual journey of passion like no other woman I’ve ever been with. WARNING: EXPLICIT SEXUAL CONTENT! ADULTS ONLY You must be 18 years of age to view and/or read the contents.

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First 30% Sample: read online
Words: 7,080
Language: English
ISBN: 9781452328638
About Marion Francis

I am a short story and novella writer. All my stories are original fiction.

My characters are derived from my readers character requests, people watching, worldwide business travel, vacation, magazines, and pure imagination.

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Review by: Charm Baker on Feb. 22, 2013 :
Apart from the obvious - the formatting and technical stuff that we hate to go back and fix (myself included :-) the story was a good one, just too short. My first time reading Marion but I'll read her again.
(reviewed long after purchase)

Review by: preston on Jan. 16, 2013 :
l loved the story
(reviewed within a month of purchase)

Review by: Dan Porter on June 08, 2012 :
The story concept was good, but the writing mechanics were poor. The whole thing felt forced and unnatural.
(review of free book)

Review by: Doris Holmes on Sep. 13, 2011 :
Get proof reader and a spell checker. BBW need love too.
(review of free book)

Review by: Bekki Lynn on Aug. 01, 2011 :
It's an ok read, but could be so much better. The author would do well to hire a proofreader to help with commas, punctuation, and dialog tags. A good critique partner would help flesh out the story a bit more, lesson the stiffness of the writing and tell him that cum is not a verb, but a noun. And hopefully, explain that the use of Tantric is not a bit sexy nor is the explanation during the act. It's like dousing a fire with water.
(review of free book)

Review by: Geraldina Gonzalez on Dec. 26, 2010 :
Definitely a good short story. Not vulgar, or ridiculously detailed like some others I have read. I liked the flow. It does need minor editing, but I didn't find them to lessen the read. An enjoyable quick read!
(review of free book)

Review by: Brian Harper on Oct. 20, 2010 :
Good Story though, I thought it could have been better with a little editing and some proof reading in spots. Their were a few run on sentences and Fragments but, it has the potential to be a lot better with some creative editing. Overall it was a very enjoyable read. If it was fixed and re edited it would get a 5 out of 5 from me but, with the spelling mistakes and fragments it gets a 4 out of 5.
(review of free book)

Review by: Ernest Winchester on Aug. 23, 2010 :
I am surprised that no one has reviewed this story before. I was drawn into it fully until near the end when all the typos, grammatical errors, missing sentence parts and tense swapping (sometimes in the same paragraph) became as a bicycle on cobblestones, very jerky and annoying.
Overall, I liked it. The description of the blonde was breathtaking, and the sex was mesmerizing. Spend more time editing in the future. The imbedded music was different but I was hoping that I could listen while reading.
(review of free book)

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