Well

Adult
Rated 4.00/5 based on 8 reviews
A spooky little tale about an orchard and a young man who finds comfort in its silence. Yet an orchard is not all he longs for, he wants more and he will stop at nothing to get it.
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Words: 1,610
Language: English
ISBN: 9781311533210
About Bridget Squires

I am a 27 year old single mom. I love writing and it is my ultimate passion. I love anything zombie and write mostly zombie novels as well. Please rate my stories and let me know what you think! This helps me to become a better writer and improve my skills! Feel free to contact me on facebook or Myspace. I love meeting new people.

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Review by: Tom Raimbault on Jan. 24, 2011 :
The opening and closing to this story are a complete contrast from one another. Bridget goes to great length, in the beginning, to illustrate a beautiful and serene place that Mother Nature had reclaimed. If you spend time out in nature, then you certainly know of this place.
But there is an ugliness to this sanctuary that many might overlook. Only the person who is responsible is full aware and in tune with what lies beneath the beauty.
Everlasting love: it's something that we all wish for in our lives. To finally have a beautiful person at your side, sharing your life as the days go by; and perhaps that person might fall in love and see the beauty in you.
But how long does it last? Do you have a sense of anxiety when the season changes or your relationship is under a new circumstance? Maybe you can "cripple" your lover, make him or her appear less beautiful to prevent losing what brings you such happiness in life. As the years go by and your lover ages, he or she might feel like a prisoner.
The years of jealousy, possessiveness, separation anxiety and dependence are often overlooked by those who see nothing more than a beautiful love from the distance.
I give this story 5 stars! Bridget did an excellent job in captivating the horror of possessive love. And if you are prisoner of such painful, destructive love; do read this tale and learn of the ugliness that lies beneath the beauty of that quiet and serene place.
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Review by: John Davis on Jan. 08, 2011 :
good story. dark, interesting. can benefit from a little editing, tho.
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Review by: SP McGiff on Dec. 27, 2010 :
An interesting story starting off with the description of an overgrown orchard before moving on to more sinister surroundings.

However, the story is weakened by excessive descriptions and some poor word choice, such as how 'inspire' is misused.

A story with an unexpected twist (which is rare), but needs work.
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Review by: Stuart Neild on Dec. 21, 2010 :
A great little horror tale.
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Review by: Mark Jacobs on Dec. 20, 2010 :
Bridget Squires has an obvious talent for constructing flowing, descriptive prose. This is a dark tale, indeed.
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Review by: Kipp Poe Speicher on Dec. 19, 2010 :
Another story painted with a beautiful but very dark brush, a story of longing and possession.
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Review by: Chris Harvey on Dec. 19, 2010 :
Another dark and disturbing short tale by Ms Squires. And I really liked it. A most effective prose style paints such a vivid and authentic picture that you can almost smell the filth and dankness. Not quite sure why the previous reviewer only felt it worthy of 2 stars, but as they say - there's no accounting for taste.

Ms Squires goes from strength to strength and it's great to see that she's doing the most important thing for any writer - she KEEPS WRITING!! (not always as easy as it sounds!)

Looking forward to your next Bridget!!
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Review by: Ernest Winchester on Dec. 18, 2010 :
Spooky it is. Spooky and sad.
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