I am retired from the U.S. Navy since 2003, currently work as a merchant seaman. I write in all types of media,from songs, to poetry, novels as well as short stories.
Jonathan Antony Strickland
on Aug. 21, 2013 :
I enjoyed this short fantasy story of a guy transported to a strange and wonderful land. The dreamlike quality explored here was my favourite part, as the narrator explains the mysterious, though beatiful world, he finds himself in.
This was good and the twist ending was also done well(though I did kind of guess what was coming, though this is not a complaint as I'm sure the writer wanted the reader to work out the strange jumps from scene to scene).
(review of free book)