A fear of lust (A fear of love #2)

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This is the second part of the first A fear of love story. Please read the first book before reading this one.

Sammie has just kissed Lisa in Lisa's bedroom and its her 18th birthday!

The next part of this book I hope to write something longer. Hope you enjoy.
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Words: 690
Language: English
ISBN: 9781301267125
About Lisa Rose

I have moved myself onto wattpad.
I'm continuing writing A VILIFY STORY. On wattpad.

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Review by: Ernest Winchester on Oct. 11, 2013 : (no rating)
Lisa, I do hope you read all of my comment attached to ‘A fear of lust 2.’ I am trying to encourage you, not put you down. You have good potential, so please keep learning and writing. To answer your question: “is punctuation a story?” it is a major part of writing, making your thoughts clearer for the reader, so please do try. I’m going to remove the rated reviews to this and your other stories to encourage your readers to check out your work. Again I say, best of everything.
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Review by: Ernest Winchester on Oct. 11, 2013 : (no rating)
Lisa, I just read your bio and see that you are only sixteen, which technically makes you too young to read adult material, let alone try to write it. You need to take English and composition classes while in school, concentrating on sentence structure and punctuation. You do have a good sense of story line so I encourage you to continue writing. Best of luck.
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