Young Annabelle

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Halfway into her summer from hell weightloss journey, seventeen year old Annabelle Simms has lost a grand total of nine pounds. According to her mother, nine pounds wasn’t good enough considering she counted every calorie Annabelle ate and burned. Barely hanging on her weightloss thread, Annabelle welcomes the distraction that new guy James brings into her life. Having fun for once this summer. More
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Words: 56,460
Language: English
ISBN: 9781301740147
About Sarah Tork

Hello...everyone.

I'm from Toronto Canada and I'm 29 years old. I'm responsible for writing the Xander Barns Series. I've also written a Young Adult series called....the Y.A Series.

I think for my entire life I've known that I wanted to write stories, especially considering I live in my head...for most of the time. If I look spaced out, not to fret, I'm not ignoring you on purpose.....I'm just killing a troll with a spear made out of poison from a unicorn horn that I had to bargain with a wart faced witch for.

I write in the middle of the night, because I like being nocturnal. I have a small obsession with pens and I don't have a degree from a university. I went, didn't like it, dropped out and took a class from the school of life...hated that too....anyways.

Right now I enjoy writing stories in two different genres, Young Adult Romance and Adult Dark Humor. My characters will often portray similar traits to my own, for instance, I hate eggplant and onions with a passion, therefor so shall they. There are other similarities, but I'm not telling those ones, except for this one last, little detail...Marisa and I feel the same way about Xander's favorite pastime. But that doesn't mean I don't think it's hilarious.

Thank you for reading my work, it is an honor and a privilege to be able to write stories and have people read them, even if they love or hate them.

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Review by: Patricia Hamill on Nov. 30, 2013 :
I have to admit that I really liked this book.

The story follows Annabelle, a slightly (very slightly in my opinion) overweight young girl whose self-image is under constant attack by her mother's obsession over thinning her down for her senior year. Wearing only a size ten, her mother buys her cloths that are too small for her as incentive for her to lose weight, makes her wear a calorie tracking wristwatch, and makes her eat horribly unsatisfying foods in tiny quantities. Besides that, Annabelle's younger siblings are often brought in by their mother to gang up on Annabelle over her weight, making them disrespect their older sister and making Annabelle feel alone in a family who views her as less than worthy of their love and acceptance.

Already downtrodden, Annabelle finds herself in a thankless job selling lemonade at a country club. But that's when things get interesting. She meets a rather rude, but very hot boy named James who turns her life upside down. Her insecurities make her doubt everything he says, especially when he tells her she's beautiful, and she comes off pretty harsh at times. On the other hand, he's pretty self-absorbed and single minded, often coming off as a jerk.

Still, throughout the whole thing, I found myself rooting for Annabelle and James. His compliments and kinder moments seem to draw Annabelle out from the dark cloud her family has cast over her. As for Annabelle, she's a complex girl, and I totally get why she has so much trouble believing that James really likes her. I can't help but cringe when she lashes out at him, sometimes deserved, but not always.

Overall, I found Annabelle to be a relatable, insecure girl. Her rollercoaster of feelings, her struggle to please her parents, and her first encounters with a handsome boy who happens to like her are realistically portrayed if, at times, hard to take. I empathized with her and rooted for her, and even rooted for James, who had some good things going for him, too.

The story is well-layed out and well-written, though I did notice some errors sprinkled throughout, mostly words that sound like the right ones, but as spelled, don't mean what the author likely intended. The opening of the story starts at the end, not the end of this book, as I had expected, but likely the end of the series, or maybe even some way into the next book. The end leaves off at a cliffhanger kind of suddenly, and while it sets the stage for the next book, I would have liked some more resolution in this one.

Overall, I really liked Young Annabelle and would recommend it to fans of realistic, contemporary YA who enjoy reading about first loves, crazy parents, and troubled teens struggling to find themselves.

Although the author requested a review for this book earlier in the year, I found my copy on Smashwords during a free promotion.
(review of free book)

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