I have moved myself onto wattpad.
I'm continuing writing A VILIFY STORY. On wattpad.
WATTPAD USERNAME: ASLISAROSE
on Oct. 12, 2013 :
Not a bad story. It threw me for a loop at first. I absolutely love the concept and it certainly goes to show how our preconceptions can often lead us astray. My only word of advice would be to clarify this transitional sentence beginning "he gives me a quick wink". I had to reread it to make complete sense of it. Otherwise a marvelously witty and very cute little tale.
(review of free book)