Hero Breaker

Rated 3.33/5 based on 4 reviews
One man and his five companions are tasked to escort a prisoner, but during their travels an unusual incident occurs. More
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Words: 1,300
Language: English
ISBN: 9781311610942


Review by: Michael Carter on Feb. 06, 2014 :
Just quickly read this. Perhaps the adult tag is because characters keep inserting big swords into their backsides. A full proper review to follow.
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Review by: Jonathan Antony Strickland on Jan. 25, 2014 : (no rating)
One other thing I would like to point out to Gage Mattson-Soule is that you have this story under adult. I used to do this myself but I now realise that the adult tag is meant only for the erotica stories, or stories depicting graphic violence or the like. Your story does not contain any of these. If you take this tag off you should get more downloads, reads and reviews.
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Review by: Jonathan Antony Strickland on Jan. 25, 2014 :
Pretty much have to agree with the review on here by Robert Zimmermann. The story has a strange flow and various strange word terms within it, and I'm not sure if it was meant to be comedy. But I too did find myself laughing at various points.

There is one thing I would like explaining further, who and what made the hero's attack each other? I was wondering if the reason was that perhaps the author had more back-story to this short tale?

However, the story actually is quite good and entertaining, so perhaps I'm being a little unfair if the case is that the story has been translated over into English.

But all in all, this was a fun fantasy tale and worth ten minutes of anybody's time...So go on...give it a read.
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Review by: Robert Zimmermann on Jan. 24, 2014 :
I really liked this story, until the last sentence. It just ends, leaving me with an incomplete feeling.

The story builds up some great suspense, interesting characters, then all hell breaks loose...which also added to my enjoyment. This author has a great story idea here, but I'm not sure about the way it "ended." Still, overall, I liked it, even if there were too many swords coming out of and going in to "backsides." I'm not sure if the author and I have the same definition of that word. But it made for a little humor, even if it wasn't intended.
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